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momnah⭐️'s avatar

oh this served ur a gorgeous writer. also ladybird 🙏

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and now Miguel's avatar

I’m like number 111.

This was so dope! Ahh so much here. But I dig the reflective energy here laced with the comedy. That bit about spire-man. Ha!

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hope(less) on sundays's avatar

i don’t know much about ney york but i know they love spiderman!! thank you thank you thank you for reading

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Jortzinho's avatar

This goes

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hope(less) on sundays's avatar

let’s goooo my comment farming worked love u jort 👩🏻‍❤️‍💋‍👩🏻

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Jortzinho's avatar

Gang nm ! 🩷

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lola's avatar

this is so wonderful

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hope(less) on sundays's avatar

thank youuu just trying to get as good as you!!!

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wildflower's avatar

Love this!!

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C.S. Mee's avatar

Adore this

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hope(less) on sundays's avatar

thank you mama love you lots!

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seamus gilkey's avatar

ooh! me too ! take me with you!

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hope(less) on sundays's avatar

of course!!

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Ritwik Upadhyay's avatar

Wow just wow!!!

Your poems are so visually interesting to read!!!

spend the night in her shoebox

inhaling dust of exposed brick

and doing coke laced with cream cheese,

no wonder they never sleep

but that's networking right there —

that's that culture thing i told you about.

My favourite part!!

Seriously, how are you able to write like this?? 😅

Love you and your poems forever and ever. ♥️

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hope(less) on sundays's avatar

love you more, friend!!!

and i like this poem too, i forgot about it :)

thank you!!

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ZenWithAPen's avatar

Wow! When you broke into the shoe box I was definitely thinking about Joe's apartment and all the screaming cockroaches. What a painfully beautiful poem teetering on being blatantly crass. Smooth style of description too!!

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hope(less) on sundays's avatar

thank you thank you i’m glad i was able to somewhat capture the essence of the big apple, my favourite place i’ve never even visited

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Minnie Mayhem's avatar

I came for the spiderman reference and stayed for the art I just witnessed. Lovely

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hope(less) on sundays's avatar

oh well i appreciate your kind words!! thank you

i’m sorry there wasn’t much about spiderman in here

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Minnie Mayhem's avatar

Not at all, it was perfect!

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HANNAH's avatar

I’m very glad I found you here 💋

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hope(less) on sundays's avatar

well i’ve been silently stalking you for a while, and i love you mama!! ✨💗

hey!

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elaine alice's avatar

As a New Hampshirite writing in the woods, it’s actually pretty cool

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hope(less) on sundays's avatar

ahhh i knew it!! on my way

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ai's notebook's avatar

i loved this! (and i also love lady bird lol)

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hope(less) on sundays's avatar

ahh thank you angel!!!

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Chad R Herman's avatar

I feel you. When I'm writing I feel like I'm just tossing wads of paper into the abyss. My 7 subacribers loving my stuff, but what of the others.

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christina fang's avatar

yes yes yes omfg i love this. i personally love to romanticizing a life in a idyllic life in an italian countryside where I drink cappuccinos whilst typing on my typewriter that I have somehow brought to my local cafe.

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hope(less) on sundays's avatar

oh i love that for you!! if i ever sell enough poems to afford it, i promise i’ll buy you an italian villa and all the cappuccinos you could wish for <3

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christina fang's avatar

omg omg omg well i can’t wait to keep supporting your beautiful poetry so that we can both live out our writer fantasies ;) We can be pen-pals as I write to you from my porch in Italy and you sit in your artsy NY apartment <3

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hope(less) on sundays's avatar

i’d love that :))

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Untangled Knots's avatar

Someone understands New York! I only spent one night in her shoebox. It was a smelly pit, and she kept forgetting my name.

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hope(less) on sundays's avatar

untangled knots is a pretty difficult name to forget! all that cream cheese must’ve fried her brain

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